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[[GZ] Dream Trance]

Kewl.

Good stuff,

Did got a bit boring at times, (for me) But overall there's direction for the song.
Good job.

GrayZ responds:

thx :3 I had a mind block half way through the song and just couldnt think of a variation so i just ended it how it begun :P.

[2:45 AM (cover)]

It's a start. You're on your right foot.

I agree with "Fastmekillyou" vocals, can be better, you're only slightly out of tune, only on a couple of of phrases. I'd personally suggest, take a lot of air for the vocals. And Try to drag on the melody a little longer, you're doing staccato, and you can song more like Elliott Smith if you hold your note longers.

Also, there's also some clipping of the guitar.

Either way, good start.
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